What's upsetting about learning this so late in my life is - how much better could I have been if I were taught to write like this at a young age? So many people see writing as a chore instead of as a means to release. I don't know how many times people have paid me to write papers for them, because the task is so daunting they would literally rather break the bank in order to keep from having to write a paper. I can't help but wonder - if we were taught to look at writing as something that helps us better understand ourselves and our ways of thinking, could we enjoy it more and, ultimately, be better writers? This also ties in with the section about writers living twice. We learn to appreciate small things more than the average bear because we look at the world through a writer's eyes. Just like painters view the world as artists. We all have our human-monkey brain, which helps us think quickly, solve problems, and deal with sensory overloads. Having said that, I think writers have access to a more critical brain which helps us appreciate the power of questioning, wondering, theorizing. This is what I adore about truly great writers - their ability to take something insignificant and turn it into a story, into something worthwhile. Inanimate objects are a lot more interesting when someone attaches meaning to it through writing.
The other assigned readings for this week were so dense, I couldn't concentrate long enough to have anything meaningful to say about them. I do look forward to reading all of your responses. Have a good night everyone :)

The other readings were so hard to read!! Glad someone felt the same. I had to read one four times. I really like the quote you included, and I wish all kids were taught this about writing in school as soon as they learn how to write. It’s good that we’re at least learning this in our adult life rather than continuing on without these important guidelines. On a personal note, I’ve liked having you in classes with me besides this writing class because you’re always open to share your opinion, and you have good perspectives :)
ReplyDeleteIt's been nice having you in my classes as well :) I think most o us were like-minded in seeing the last reading as really heavy!
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Firstly, don't worry about what your writing could have been and realize where it still can go! We all have to start somewhere and the unique journeys are what makes our art, in this case writing, special. Your casual style in your blog makes it fun and easy to read and the details let your personality interweave with whatever subject you're wiring about. Without that element, no technical advice to improve your work would be worthwhile.
ReplyDeleteAs far as Goldberg's advice, I think she does a great job relating with the reader in a light-hearted yet concise manner and really makes being a writer sound a lot more simple and friendly than we know it to be. In a way, her writing and yours have much in common- taking denser topics and making them approachable.
There's always new ways to grow, just don't forget that where you're at is already great! :)
Thanks Erin :) I'm glad my writing is easy to read. I hope I come across more conversational than technical. I REALLY like Goldberg's book, the way it's written, the friendliness of it. It makes writing see much more approachable than other books on writing I've read before.
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